correct or not?

correct or not?
a poem dedicated to My Beau
Kuala Lumpur, March 29, 2004


never a dull moment with you, honey
that's why i love your company
and i suspect same goes for me

if ever you're afraid, just remember that fear stems from the unknown
knowledge and understanding empowers us to conquer our fears
and take control of our lives

i'm certain you're not one to let the situation control you
you're more likely to want to control the situation
correct or not?